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Evening tale to Panni by ~riotgirl6661:iconriotgirl6661:



Once upon a time there was a Panni who had a girlfriend, Judit. In the same country where they lived but even in the same city, lived a Fanni and a Móni who were envious of their harmonious relationship. They spin plans in secret of how could they bring to ruin it.
  They made out that they camouflage themselves also a pair. Certainly it wasn’t so easy to fool Panni and Judit (shucks!), they found out their base plan, so then they started to deliberate upon what should they do then. As they was deliberating, suddenly Dyna appeared who incessantly praised her Dávid and she told about her sexual experience excitedly of who, what, how and where diddled… Although this interested nobody, indeed! People were filled with loathing rather. They stopped her quickly. Then something swept trough their mind, if somebody’s so nymphomaniac already, why wouldn’t they take advantage of this? They sent her to the Fanni-Móni pair, to let her harass them till their brain didn’t flow out, to entertain them with her stories, because it was well-known that Fanni retreated immediately from all kinds of  little perversity (or just simply didn’t wanna confess that she likes it!). Fanni recessed while she was screaming, sticked her hands on her ear while Dyna got into it increasingly better and better. During Móni was cried “Jesus, Dyna!” and “Oh My God!”, while Dyna attained Fanni’s face till she was spitting her face in her excitement, then she saw Fanni’s wide open eyes, and she licked one. So her contact lens fell out. This was the secret weapon against Dyna, possible to stop her with this simply. Fanni got it quickly, snatched up the lentil from the land and put it back into her eye, while Móni forced Dyna to watch it. They broke her with this, she laid down the ground. When Móni released her, epileptic attack attacked her but thanks to Fanni’s and Móni’s evil they turned away from her, while she snaped at her tongue and she bled to death…
Panni and Judit recognized that they’re sluts rotten to the core. They needed a new plan, then they remembered the other two girls’ boyfriend-search desire. They realized that it’s their element, they need a fella, they would be destroyed without it. They were thinking about the right person for this. Móni seemed the weaker link. They dawn on that passion dwells behind Móni’s fervid protest, she was in love with Ferike to death. She couldn’t deceive Judit, she understood the tiny signs, vainly her intellectual level seemed low sometimes. Their new plan was done through Panni’s brilliance, with wich they wanted to enmesh Móni and swoop down on her. So they tried to get near the object (or man) of Móni’s desire. Ferike was a difficult case, everybody knew about him that he loved himself more than anything else, his element was to make others serve him. So they had to take advantage of this. It came to light about Móni (likewise by right of observations), that she adores, if somebody humiliates her, dictates to her. So they visited Ferike. They took a nice worked mirror as a gift for him, that when he’d look at his beauty and he’d fall into daze from this, to let it be easier to execute their plan with him. It managed to attain this, Ferike saw himself in his mind’s eyes, as he asked for his own hand and by that he incessantly could groan only that yes yes yes YES! Meanwhile Panni crept into his tiny brain. Than it turned out, it wasn’t necessary to cut up his skull for it, the tiny hole of the ear was also enough. Panni planted with the skin of her teeth the developed chip into his brain (the chip was bigger at least five times than Ferkó’s brain, so perhaps the seating of brain into the chip definition would be more accurate). Judit started leaping of her joy and then her hands’ lashing ruined everything! She hit Ferike on his head, whose brain flew out through his ear. So the tiny chip flew out through the open window, Panni made after it, but she swung on the window frame and fell down from the 10th (floor).
  Unfortunately she wasn’t a cat, so she couldn’t turn around… She attained the chip, meanwhile the falling she pressed it into her hand happily, then after 2 seconds her brain splashed on the concrete… When Judit saw it, she couldn’t digest the loss of her faithful love, she made a last scream of death and jumped after her pair. The two corpses lay in the car park beside each other. Such beautiful silent their blood slurred in a heart shape. The last goodness died in the world with this, which took the field against the evil…
©2008-2009 ~riotgirl6661
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Shall I be fastidious or not?
I've decided not :P

I was bored, Panni asked me to tell a story and this is the outcome (I wrote it about 10 in the evening :P)...

I didn't want an end like this but I realised, if it were a happy end I'd write it till midnight. :XD: (I even surprised Panni with it :D)

The characters are real people, I don't take upon responsibility for anything.

Events preceding and leading up to:
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Thanks to Panni :iconadysokk: for the help
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ez a fordítás ugye? :D

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~/ kábultan párolódtam a hátsó peronon a kollektív gőzben
/ I was stewing bemusedly on the rear platform in the collective gas
/ Je cuisais à l'étouffée perplexement sur la plate-forme arrière dans le gaz collectif
pontosan :D

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A valószerű ábrázolás szándéka mögött a mulandóság elleni harc áll.
Ügyes vagy :hug: :D

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Az emberek már csak ilyenek: mindig módot találnak arra, hogy több szenvedést okozzanak azoknak, akiket szeretnek, és akikre büszkék, mint azoknak, akiket utálnak vagy megvetnek.
köszi :D de a segitséged nélkül nem ment volna ;)

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A valószerű ábrázolás szándéka mögött a mulandóság elleni harc áll.
:D

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Az emberek már csak ilyenek: mindig módot találnak arra, hogy több szenvedést okozzanak azoknak, akiket szeretnek, és akikre büszkék, mint azoknak, akiket utálnak vagy megvetnek.
He he... Nice. :)
Sounds total chick stuff to me though. :p

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Santosh Achari
well i think it sounds better in hungarian : )
but its for you ;)

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A valószerű ábrázolás szándéka mögött a mulandóság elleni harc áll.
Am sure it does.
Thanks. :D

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Santosh Achari
you're welcome :hug:

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A valószerű ábrázolás szándéka mögött a mulandóság elleni harc áll.

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